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~FORGIVE ME~



Please, please forgive me
I am innocent from what you thought
Remove your eyes of me,
Cause I’m not the person that you thought
Think again about me
Don’t try to deny what you found
Am I the only one that you ignored?
Or the only one that you know
Give me another chance,
Just to explain to you the misunderstand
Enough for now,
Forgive me if u want
Or stay like whatever you like
My last word for you that
In the end you’ll find the truth
And then you will forgive me
And that’s for sure...
Hey all...


"Can you forgive me again?
I don't know what I said
But I didn't mean to hurt you..."

"So Please Forgive Me"



I really hope you like my poem:rose:


Peace.
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:iconunicorn-skydancer08:
unicorn-skydancer08 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2008
This is wonderful! It's rather short, but straight to the point, and very heartfelt. You're an awesome poet!

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I believe in Jesus Christ, my Savior. If you do too, copy and paste this into your signature.

Treat others the way you want to be treated. :hug:

If we spent every minute of our lives thanking God for all that He has done, that still wouldn't be enough. :pray:

A little hard work never killed anybody.
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No1Believes-Me Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2008
Awww!!!
Thats mean a lot to me..

Thank you so much :blushes: :hug:
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unicorn-skydancer08 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2008
You're very welcome! Keep up the superb work!

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I believe in Jesus Christ, my Savior. If you do too, copy and paste this into your signature.

Treat others the way you want to be treated. :hug:

If we spent every minute of our lives thanking God for all that He has done, that still wouldn't be enough. :pray:

A little hard work never killed anybody.
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No1Believes-Me Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2008
Will do.. Thanks ^_^
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:iconunicorn-skydancer08:
unicorn-skydancer08 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2008
You're more than welcome!

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I believe in Jesus Christ, my Savior. If you do too, copy and paste this into your signature.

Treat others the way you want to be treated. :hug:

If we spent every minute of our lives thanking God for all that He has done, that still wouldn't be enough. :pray:

A little hard work never killed anybody.
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No1Believes-Me Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2008
:aww:
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AzraelDarkAngel540 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2008
I like the lyrical quality to the poem, it is flowing and keeps me reading till the end..

Keep up the good work! Would you have a look at my gallery pls? Thanks!
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:iconno1believes-me:
No1Believes-Me Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2008
Thank you so much for reading my poem and I really appreicate your nice comment :hug:

Thanks for adding it to your favourites too..


Sure.. I will now ^_^
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AzraelDarkAngel540 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2008
thou art most gentle my lady :-)
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No1Believes-Me Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2008
:nod:
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friendkeep Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
I forgive you... Lol...

Ok, so I don't know what particular events inspired this specific literature,

but I like it...

I left a note on your front page,

but then realized that it doesn't show up on the top of the page,

so I left a comment so you'd hopefully notice a number change,

What better excuse is there to let myself read one more piece of art before I absolutely have to get some sleep.

Hope to hear from you soon...!
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No1Believes-Me Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2007
LOL..


Thanks alot.. So glad that you like it ^^

I dobt know about the comment but I'll go and take a look now:nod:


Thank you!!!
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:iconfriendkeep:
friendkeep Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
Hahaha... you're welcome...!

hope to hear from you soon...

Please...!
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kukuma-chan Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2007
i love poems it's to nice^^
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:iconno1believes-me:
No1Believes-Me Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2007
Thank u so much...

I really appreciate ur lovely comments.:thanks:
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:iconzephonsoul:
ZephonSoul Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2006
Really intense! I agree with Devil427, it could be used for the lyrics of a song (a deep one, of course!)! :)
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No1Believes-Me Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2006
Thanks alot for readin' my poem!
It means alot to me...

I'm so glad you liked it :thanks:


Thanks again.


Much appreciated!
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No1Believes-Me Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2006
Thanks alot for readin' my poem!
It means alot to me...

I'm so glad you liked it :thanks:


Thanks again.


Much appreciated!
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ZephonSoul Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2006
No problem! :thumbsup:
I'll enjoy reading them one by one! A shame I haven't much time lately, but this way I'll have eventually more concentration on every piece! :)

By the way, I used to write poetries during the secondary high school (guess I had more freetime...), I also won a school contest! :D
Never tried in english though, maybe with your inspiration I could give it a shot one of these days! ;)

Continue writing! That is still one of my favourite arts, probably my favourite! :)
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No1Believes-Me Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2006
You're a nice person!

Thank you so much for your encouragin' words... :hug:

You used to write?! wow!!! That's intering... & you won too?! :clap: Bravo!

CoOL! You should give it a shot...
I'm sure that you'll be a great poet.


You can't imagine how happy I am to know that it's one of your favourite arts :blushes:


Thanks again!:rose:
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:iconzephonsoul:
ZephonSoul Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2006
In fact that event was funny, since I won a competition during the secondary high school for a poetry I wrote in the primary high school! :D

I'm not that sure I'll be grat though... you know, since I started studying more I didn't write anymore, I just made some composition for my girlfriend (:date:), and furthermore my general writing mood has a lot changed from the darkest one I had during adolescence :bounce:

You are a very nice person too! You know, nowadays we're all losing imagination, interest for inner feelings... maybe 'cause of this culture of "imaging" of ours. Like I did, young people who are crossing a difficult moment or having inner contrasts manage sometimes to express theirself thorugh poetry (often discredited by adults and considered only as a product of "juvenile uneasiness"). Then, after they grow up a little, they're overwhelmed by society's rules and can't find time or courage to continue expressing theirselves.

That is a shame, since everyone has a story to tell, a feeling to share, or a fear to exorcise.
I think that writing it's the most emotional one, since it's able to use words, which are our primary way of communicating thoughts, images, visual as well as metaphorical ones, and havs exactly the shape of the flowing thoughts of one's mind.

Now I'm experimenting photography since it has always fascinated me, but I'm still at a very early-learning level, I'm not still able to communicate that much with photos... :constipated:

Now I've been too long! I'm very sorry! :blushes:

You're very welcome about everything! Keep writing and deviating! As one of my favourite movie quote says: "life is but a storm of shit, and the best umbrella is Art!" :D
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No1Believes-Me Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2006
That was really nice... ;P
I enoyed reading it!

Plus, you're totally right on all the things that you said.

Photography is wonderful...
Wish youluck in this field:aww:

Don't be sorry about that, it was really nice of you to write all this! I found it really interesting.


I will. :thanks:
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Devil427 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2006
yeah me too remind me by Evanescence my lovely artist in the whole world at first .... great job :)

peace
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No1Believes-Me Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2006
Thanks alot for your nice comment! :aww:
I really appreciate it...


So glad you like my poem ^_^


Thanx again!



Peace.
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Devil427 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2006
:bow:
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No1Believes-Me Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2006
:aww:
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Devil427 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2006
:blowkiss:
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No1Believes-Me Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2006
:hug:
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Devil427 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2006
:highfive:
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Aj-sama Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2006
Very nice! :D Once again, you've shown wonderful portrayal of emotions. This is very touching, and the way you've put this poem together really works well to emphasize that. Excellent job! :hug:

(I do think I should mention that you might want to change the "u" to "you". "You" generally looks better in poetry like this, and since you used "you" in all the other places it helps to keep it looking the same. Otherwise everything is good though! :D)
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No1Believes-Me Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2006
Lol... I honestly didn't notice the "u" lol :giggle:

Thanks alot for tellin' me... :hug:


Thank you so much for your amazing comment... Much appreciated! :thanks: :rose: :dance: lol
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Aj-sama Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2006
Lol. XD No problem! I'm glad I could lend a hand! :D

And you're welcome! It's really great to be able to read such awesome poetry like this! :hug:
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No1Believes-Me Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2006
:blushes:

So kind of you! :hug: :thanks:
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Aj-sama Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2006
Hehe. :D :hug:
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TurtleSea Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
wow:tears:

Keep going!
:kiss: Bjs Turtle
Ride Free, Citizen
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No1Believes-Me Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2006
:hug:

Thanks alot...
I really appreciate it ^_^
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Desprado Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2006
great poem , lov it :aww:
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No1Believes-Me Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2006
Thanks alot for ur sweet comemnt!:aww:
I'm so glad u love it...


I really appreciate ur comment! ^_^
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PeRfect-NatuRe Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2006
Aw:D

dear...May God bless u

ur Amazin'....best of wishes:rose:
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No1Believes-Me Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2006
May God bless you too...

Your amazing + sweet & encouraging comments mean alot to me! :thanks: :hug:
Thank you very much dear:heart:

I really appreciate it!

Best wishes to u too:rose:
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SteveJones313 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2006  Professional Writer
It sounds so real with emotion. Excellent work.
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:iconno1believes-me:
No1Believes-Me Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2006
Thank you so much:hug:

Your encouraging comment means alot to me...
Thanks, I really appreciate it:thanks:
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SteveJones313 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2006  Professional Writer
Awww *Hugs*
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No1Believes-Me Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2006
:hug:
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undetected-thought Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2006
This reminded me of "Missing" By Evanescence at first, because of "Please, please forgive me". And very lovely job!
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No1Believes-Me Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2006
CoOL :w00t: lol!

Thanks alot for ur sweet comment:hug:
Much appreciated!
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Alranz Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2006   Writer
:clap: very well done :nod:
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No1Believes-Me Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2006
Thanks alot:hug:

It's really great to see your comment... That's so nice of you!
Thanks, I really appreciate it... :thanks:
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Alranz Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2006   Writer
oh, you are very welcome! :hug:
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